After some feedback on my last story, multiple people told me that my idea was slightly over done and predictable so I decided to scrap the use of ice caves but focus on the rug walking through a blizzard in a different setting for a more unexpected and humorous outcome.
Scene opens with a small mound of snow, Rig bursts up from it and climbs out of the ground into a blizzard.
He holds himself from the cold and starts to walk with difficulty against the wind into the blizzard. Rig sees something in the distance and walks towards it. When he gets to it, it's a large box covered in snow. The rig wipes some snow away to reveal the words in big bold letters "Fish Fingers". He moves to another shape and kicks it, all the snow falls off to reveal a tub of ice cream. A light starts to appear over the rig, he looks behind himself and his eyes get wide as it cuts to a large door opening in the sky with a bright light. A large hand comes out of the light and reaches for the rig as the scene fades to white.
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